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        When vs. While

        Indicate same-time activities

        Talking on phone and looking at newborn
         

        In Context

        My wife gave birth to our daughter last night. Our little baby girl was napping when I phoned my family. I was staring at her little face while I was holding her. She was sleeping so peacefully.

        When I called home, my brother picked up the phone. We were talking while my mother was listening in on our conversation. My brother said that she had tears in her eyes while I was talking about the birth.

         

        Same-time Events

        WHEN

        When + clause relates an activity that occurs at the same time as or slightly before the activity in the main clause. The clause following when may express (1) a short interruption, or (2) a response to the activity in the first clause. " X occurs, Y results." Typically, the verb in the when-clause is non-progressive and expresses an activity with shorter duration.

        INTERRUPTION—AT THE MOMENT

        When you called, he was holding his newborn baby.  

        when - same time
         

        RESPONSE—IMMEDIATELY AFTER

        When you called, he picked up his phone.

        when - immediately after 

        WHILE

        While + clause relates an activity that occurs at the same-time as (simultaneously with) the activity in the main clause. The clause following while includes a verb with a meaning and/or a tense that expresses duration. The while-clause often expresses a background activity to the focus-activity in the main clause.                                                    

        SAME TIME—SOMETIME DURING THE TIME

        While he was talking, he was holding his newborn baby.  (held)

        occurring same time
         

        SAME TIME—DURING THE TIME

        While he was talking, his baby slept.   (was sleeping)

        occurring during the time

          

        When and while are "temporal" prepositions which are complemented (completed) by a time-related clause. (Huddleston, et. al. 700)   When and while, along with several other adverbs, were reanalyzed (2002) as prepositions.  At the same time, the complements that could follow a preposition were widened to include: a noun, noun phrase, gerund, infinitive, clause  and more. See Prepositional Complements.  In effect, we have a clause within a prepositional phrase!  He was holding his baby [PP while [Cls you were talking.]]  Also see While / When -ing "Reducing time-relative clauses"

         

        When has four meanings: 

        1. interruptionHe was holding his newborn baby when you called.   ("called" ["rang up"] —short duration² )
        2. same timeHe was holding his newborn baby when (or while) he was talking on the phone.  ("was talking" —longer duration³)
        3. immediately after (in response)—When you called, he picked up his phone.  ("called" and "picked up"—short duration)
        4. anytime / wheneverWhen he has a question, he calls the doctor.  (cause effect) See If v. When.

        While has two meanings:

        1. same timeHe was holding his newborn baby while (or when) he was talking on the phone. (was talking — duration [process verb]) 
        2. contrastWhile some fathers are uncomfortable holding newborns, others are not. "whereas"

        Long or short duration may be expressed by the meaning of the verb:    

        1. duration (process) such as talk, walk, eat, sleep, cook, study.  (nonprogressive form)  (See Verbs of Short and Long Duration)
        2. short duration (punctual) such as bark, jump, clap, sneeze, gulp, begin, end, fall  (nonprogressive form).

        Long or short duration may be expressed by the tense of the verb:   

        1. duration (process) He has been calling you all day. That dog is barking. (progressive form) The dog barked. (habitually) (See Present, Past, Present Perfect.)
        2. short duration (punctual) He called (rang). The dog barked. (once)   (nonprogressive form)  (See Past.)

         

        See and Verb Meaning & Timing, Verbs of Short and Long Duration, and Duration vs Completion (process v. accomplishment).

         

         

         

         

        When / While

        Foreground vs. Background Activity

        The baby is yawning.
         

        When—interruption vs. While—another ongoing activity

        INTERRUPTION

        Imagine a movie scene with a lot of people talking in a room, and then the camera zooms in on one person. The person becomes the subject of the foreground and the other people and activity move into the background. In a similar way, when focuses on an interrupting activity. Follow-up comments tend to focus on the foreground activity.

        BACKGROUND FOREGROUND–INTERRUPTION
          FOCUS FOR CONVERSATION

        He was holding his baby

        when the phone rang.

        Who called?

        He was counting the babies fingers

        when the baby yawned.

        How cute!

        Everyone quieted down

        when the baby was born.

        What a moment!

        ANOTHER ONGOING ACTIVITY

        Both when and while can be followed by a clause that draws attention to another ongoing activity that is the central focus. The verb in the while clause is mostly progressive, expressing repetitive or detailed activities. The verb in the when clause is mostly nonprogressive, expressing an activity without particular focus on duration.

        BACKGROUND FOREGROUND–SAME TIME
          FOCUS FOR CONVERSATION

        He was holding his baby

         

        while we were discussing names.

        What names do you like?

        They were trying to raise a baby

        when/while they were still living in a small apartment in the city.

        So did they move to a house?

        The baby's gender (sex) was revealed

        when he was born.

        Were they surprised?

         

         

        backgrounding (Ger) – a grammatical term for moving something out of central focus  and into a position of less focus (less importance or less interest).

        come up with (Phrasal Verb) – think of, put together, call to mind

        conceive (V) – begin life (also, to form a notion, an opinion, a purpose, an idea)

        interruption (N) – a stop or break in the middle of an activity; a discontinuance; interference with action or speech

        reveal (V) – announce publicly, make known to all

        tends to be (V Expr.) – is more likely to be; is more expected to be

        yawn (V) (N) – an involuntary action of opening the mouth widely and taking air into the lungs

         

         

         

         

        When

        Express same-time v. immediately after

         

         

        When—"at the same time" vs. "immediately after"

        ABOUT THE SAME TIME

        When + clause relates an activity that occurs slightly before or at the same time as the activity in the main clause. Depending on the verb tense, the clause following when may express a routine or a one-time response to the activity in the main clause. "X occurs, Y results." The verb in the when clause is mostly non-progressive and expresses an activity without focusing on its duration.          

        FIRST ACTIVITY JUST BEFORE OR SAME TIME
        PP + CLAUSE MAIN CLAUSE

        When I call, (present form)

        "anytime this occurs"  (routine)

        the doctor comes. (present)

        "this occurs"

        same-time

        When I called, (past)

        "at the time this occurred"  (1-time)

        the doctor came. (past)

        "this occurred"

        When I call, (present form)

         

        the doctor will come. (prediction)

         

        IMMEDIATELY AFTER

        When + clause may also relate an activity that occurs just before the activity in the main clause. Depending on the verb tense, the clause following when may express a routine or a one-time response to the activity in the main clause. The verb in the when clause is mostly non-progressive and expresses an activity of short duration¹; that is, the timing of the activity has a clear beginning and end.

        FIRST ACTIVITY SECOND ACTIVITY
        PP + CLAUSE MAIN CLAUSE

        When the doctor comes in,

        "anytime this occurs"  (routine)

        I ask her questions.  (present)

        "this occurs immediately after"

        same-time

        When the doctor came in, 

        "at the time this occurred"  (1-time)

        I asked her questions. (past)

        "this occurred" 

        When the doctor comes in, 

        I will asked her questions. (prediction)

         

        * not used (not logical) / ~ requires a special context for use

        duration verb "atelic"

        ¹ short duration verbs —See Duration vs Completion "telic". 

         when (connective preposition)—See Connective Prepositions (for a  description)

        Also see If vs. When, When vs. While  and Awhile v. A while (N - Adv [P])

        (Huddleston 8 §6.4 [29])

        See Grammar Notes below for details about grammar terms.

         

         

         

         

        When / While

        As, During, Throughout, Meanwhile

         

         

        Other expressions for when and while

        WHEN
        SAME-TIME¹

        We were eating at the moment he called.

        We were eating when he called.

        We were eating at the time he called.  (point, instant)

        We were eating when he called.

        We were eating whenever he called. (any time)

        We were eating when he called.

        IMMEDIATELY AFTER²

        We stopped eating upon receiving his call.

        We stopped eating when we received his call.

        We stopped eating just as he called.

        We stopped eating when he called 

        We complained immediately after he called.

        We complained when he called.

        We complained shortly after he called.

        We complained when he called 

        WHILE
        SAME-TIME

        We were eating dinner as he was talking / talked on his phone.

        We were eating dinner while he was

        During the time that we were eating dinner, he was talking / talked on his phone.
        While we were eating…

        He was talking / talked on his phone throughout the time that we were eating.
        He was talking while we were eating.

         

        He was talking / talked on his phone at the same time that we were eating.

        He was talking / talked on his phone. Meanwhile, we were eating.

        He was talking / talked on his phone during the time that we were eating.

        He was talking / talked on his phone all the while we were eating. (expression)

         

         

         

         

         

        Punctuation

        Commas

         

         

        Initial vs. Final Clause Placement

        INITIAL CLAUSE  PLACEMENT

        use a commaInitial placement of a when phrase/clause requires a comma to separate it from the main clause.

        WHEN + CLAUSE MAIN CLAUSE

        When you called,

        he was watching his baby.

        While he was talking,

        he was holding his newborn.

        FINAL CLAUSE PLACEMENT

        don't use a commaNo comma is used if the when phrase/clause is placed after the main clause.

        MAIN CLAUSE WHEN + CLAUSE

        He was watching his baby

        when you called.

        He was holding his newborn

        while he was talking.

         

         

        Traditional grammar analyzes this structure (e.g. when you called) as an "adverbial clause". Current linguistic research analyzes this structure as a prepositional phrase; it places "when" in the category of Preposition (i.e. when [prep] you called [clause]). See Grammar Notes below.

        newborn (N) — a very young baby (first few days)

        The background activity is expressed in the independent clause.

         

         

         

         

         

         

        Common Mistakes

        Errors and Solutions

         

         

        Error and Solution

        ERROR

        * While he called me, he was driving to work.

         Use while before the activity of longer duration (the background activity).

        *While he is watching television, she does not.

        Background activity is expressed, but focus activity is unclear.

        SOLUTION

        When he called me, he was driving to work. (interruption)

        While he was driving to work, he called me. (background activity)

        While driving, he called me. (reduced clause)

        While he is watching television, she isn't able to (can't) read.

        While he watches television, she does something else.

        (Complete the focus activity.)

         

        *not used

        See When / While -ing (reduced clauses, verbless clauses)

         

         

         

         

         

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        Grammar Notes (Advanced)

        Traditional and Linguistic Description

         

         

        Traditional / ESL and Linguistic Descriptions

        TRADITIONAL GRAMMAR

        In traditional grammar, the adverbs when and while introduce adverbial clauses. They are called subordinating conjunctions, which in this case, join time-related clauses. The joined clause is a dependent clause. 

        Note that in traditional grammar, a preposition requires an object, a noun or noun phrase, after it.  All other types of complements such as an adverb phrase, an infinitive phrase, a gerund phrase, or clause are not included in the definition of a prepositional phrase. The connective word is called a conjunction or subordinating conjunction

        i.   He was driving to work while he was calling me.(adverbial clause = subordinating conj. + dependent clause)

        ii.   He was driving to work while calling me.(adverbial clause = subordinating conj. + reduced clause)

        iii. He was driving to work while on the phone. (adverbial clause = subordinating conj. + prepositional phrase)

         

        Swan mentions (lists) as, when and while as being used for 'background' action or a situation which is going on when something else happens/happened. [No grammar term is given.] (73)

        Murphy lists these words in the table of Contents as "Conjunctions and Prepositions". No mention of grammar terms are used on  the practice pages. (113 - 120)

        LINEAR DIAGRAM

        Linear diagram: he was holding his baby while talking

        LINGUISTIC DESCRIPTION

        The following—while, when, though, although, if, as if, as though, whenever, once and whilst—are prepositions, which function as adjuncts (words that add extra information to a clause). They differ from prepositions that function as complements, which add information necessary in order to complete th meaning of the clause.

        1) Preposition (functioning as an adjunct): He hung his coat up before sitting down.  (The main clause can stand independently.)

        2) Preposition (functioning as a complement): He hung his coat on the hook. (The clause requires the prep. phrase to make sense.)

         

        An adjunct preposition takes a finite clause, a nonfinite clause, or a prep. phrase as its complement.

        i.   He was driving to work while he was calling me. (finite clause)

        ii.  He was driving to work while calling me. (nonfinite clause)

        iii.  He was driving to work while on the phone. (prep + prep. phrase) 

        See Prepositional Complements for others.

        Note that a large number of adverbs have been re-assigned to the category of Preposition, which allows a wide range of complement type. 

        Other terms:

        Temporal Location Adjuncts (after, before, since, when, while) 

        Prepositions  (Huddleston 8 §6.3)

        Conjunctions (Swan 73, 411.6, 30, 97)

        Subordinator. Adverbial Clause (Biber 2.4.7.5)

        Subordinator. Adverbial Clause (Quirk 15.28)

         

        TREE DIAGRAM

        Tree diagram:He was holding his baby while he was talking

         

        Word Categories: N – noun; V – verb; Aux – auxiliary; Adj – adjective; Adv – adverb; P – preposition; Detdeterminer.

        Phrasal Categories: NP – noun phrase; VP – verb phrase; AdjP – adjective phrase; AdvP – adverb phrase; PP – prepositional phrase; DP – determinative phrase.

        Clausal Categories: Cls – clause; F – finite; NF – nonfinite (Ger – gerund; Inf – infinitive; PPart – past participle).

        Word Functions: Subj – Subject; Pred – Predicate/Predicator; Compcomplement: elements required by an expression to complete its meaning (DO – direct object; IO – indirect object);  Adjunctadjunct elements not required by an expression to complete its meaning (Subord – subordinator; Coord – coordinator); Suplsupplement: a clause or phrase added to a clause but not closely related to the central thought or structure of the main clause.

         

         

        Works Cited

        • Azar, Betty Schrampfer, and Stacy A. Hagen. Understanding and Using English Grammar. 4th ed., Pearson Education, 2009.
        • Huddleston, Rodney D., and Geoffrey K. Pullum. The Cambridge Grammar of the English Language. Cambridge UP, 2002.
        • Murphy, Raymond. English Grammar in Use. 5th ed., Cambridge UP. 2019.
        • Swan, Michael. Practical English Usage. 3rd ed., Oxford UP, 2005.

         

         

         

         

        Practice

        Simultaneous Activities

        Monkey on the roof

         

        Complete the sentence with when and while.

        1. Select the response from the list that best completes the sentence. 
        2. Compare your response to the feedback by clicking the "Check" or "Check 1-10" button.
         

        simultaneous (Adj) — same time   

         

        1.
         I was making dinner. My sister was watching television.



        2.
        We were watching the movie called "King Kong".   A friend came over.

        3.
        We were watching the movie.  We were laughing about its unlikely plot (story).


        unlikely plot  (expression) — seemingly impossible events that form a story

        4.
        The movie ended. We turned off the TV.

        5.
        I was talking on the phone.  My friend was reading magazines.

        6.
          My friend stood up to leave.  It was midnight.

        7.
        doorknobHe touched the door knob.  (first activity)  We heard a thud on the roof.  (second activity)


        thud (N) — loud heavy sound

        8.
        He looked at me. (first activity) I said, "King Kong?" (second activity)

        9.
        He opened the front door. (first activity)  We saw nothing but leaves and branches. (second activity)

        10.
        Morning came. (first activity) A truck lifted our "King Kong" off the roof. (second activity)



        fallen treetree removal
         

         

         

         

         

        Practice 2

        Dependent on Devices

        Phone Dependence
         

         

        Read for Errors

        Psychologists have a growing concern with iPhone and other smart-phone dependence. People are interacting with their phones when they could be interacting with people.  Teens and adults are engaging in addictive behavior such as checking their phones when they are having face-to-face conversations.  Some teens are using words such as LOL, BRB while they are talking with friends. Some people report that they feel "naked" while they forget their phones or somehow become separated from the device. 

        Many cannot sleep while their phones are next to their beds.  A number of people report checking email in movie theaters when they are supposed to be engaged in the movie.  Other people have admitted to doing things on their phones while they were driving or operating heavy equipment. Unfortunately, a distracted driver is often unable to disengage fast enough when an accident is about to happen.  Is it a sign of the times, or just bad behavior?

        addictive (Adj) — a habit that turns to a need

        admit to (V) — say with difficulty or embarrassment that something is true

        dependence (N) — the state of relying on or needing someone or something for aid, support

        concern (N) — worry

        device (N) a mobile device: smart-phone, tablet, iPad, iPod, etc.

        disengage (V) — free or release one's attention to something

        engage (V) — occupy the attention of a person

        naked (Adj) — without clothing

        psychologist (N) — doctors who study the mind and human behavior

        used to be  (V) — past custom

        "Do you sleep with your iPhone?"  AppAdvice. 26 Jul 2011. http://appadvice.com/appnn/2011/07/do-you-sleep-with-your-iphone-psychologists-worry-about-this-new-addiction. Accessed on 19 Aug. 2016.

         

         

         

         

        Correct or Incorrect?

        1. Select your response—correct or incorrect.
        2. Compare your response to the feedback by clicking the "Check" or "Check 11-18" button.

         

        11.
        People are interacting with their phones when they could be interacting with people.

           

        12.
        Teens and adults are engaging in addictive behavior such as checking their phones when they are having face-to-face conversations.

           

        13.
        Some teens are using words such as LOL and BRB while they are talking with friends.

           

        14.
        Some people report that they feel "naked" while they forget their phones or somehow become separated from the device.

           

        15.
        M
        any cannot sleep while their phones are next to their beds.

           

        16.
        A number of people report checking email in movie theaters when they are supposed to be engaged in the movie.

           

        17.
        Other people have admitted to doing things on their phones when they were driving or operating heavy equipment.

           

        18.
        Unfortunately, a distracted driver is often unable to disengage fast enough when an accident is about to happen.

           

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

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